Final decision.

The journey to the final publication has taken an awful lot of thinking about and taken a lot of revisiting throughout the module. Some last minute design advice came from a landscape photographer, designer and artist in Devon.

I asked if perhaps Blurb was a little amateurish. She emphatically stated that while she was able to design her own books and has published widely, that Blurb was not to be sniffed at and the application was very much still in her armoury.

She made some comments on font sizes and positioning but otherwise I wasn’t far off from an acceptable standard. I am not sure that the genre appealed to her really.

I noticed that the image of the kettle, mug and spilt milk wouldn’t stand up to printing due to a blown highlight. I have re taken the photograph.

I was intending to photograph the book prior to assessment but I didn’t want to risk damaging it. The book is available to assessors.

I am very pleased with the end result and very glad that my tutor pushed me to achieve this standard.

Further Reading

Books

I have read so much about photographers over the last two years and I realised that unlike me, many successful photographers have a very good broad based education.

 Further reading was undertaken to broaden my general knowledge base – as listed below. Some of the reading is dense and this isn’t meant as a review but more of a record of reading to benefit my conceptual development.

 

Barthes Mythologies

Roland Bathes

Publishers: Vintage

The book provides a number of short chapters that demonstrate the art of deconstructing various elements of life. This follows on from the introduction to Barthes during Project 2.

 

 Communist Party Manifesto

 Karl Marx

 Publishers: Penguin

This book was chosen as a building block for me to understand the historic backdrop to the social and political history of class struggles between the bourgeoisie and the proletariat.

 

Socrates

Anthony Gottlieb

 Publishers: Phoenix

This book actually chose me while browsing a bookshop and it fell off the shelf. Socrates was a fascinating introductory read that has given me some insight into Greek philosophy.

Please find the tutor report here:

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Original:

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Reworked:

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Haiku:

Apron strings fall loose

Rose and Thistle intertwined

A confession shared

Diary extract:

1st October 2015

14th February 2000, I went into labour. At 0408hrs on 15th February 2000, my daughter was born. And fifteen and a half years later, I am not sure that I ever caught up after the shock of being told that I was 22 weeks pregnant – how on earth did I miss that?

There hadn’t been time to read the manual! I wasn’t yet married and I was the first female in the family to give birth out of wedlock! It’s only a few months before my wedding though. I prayed to God that night albeit I’m not sure I believe in him.

Fast-forward to today… 16 years today since I was first told of her imminent arrival.

My 15-1⁄2 year old baby breezed in this afternoon from her morning out. She seemed to be walking taller. She looked like a woman all of a sudden. Strikingly beautiful – I am biased of course.
I am sure though that she left home this morning looking like a girl still – or rather, a teenager full of angst. She had always had an old head on young shoulders. Hmmm.

Something was different with her. I couldn’t put my finger on what the change was at first. Mother’s instinct kicked in.

Then I realised…
Heart churning, I folded the laundry, and took off my apron. I sat at the table cutting flowers, becoming aware of my age. The cold light flooding in through the window – invading the warmth of our home – reinforcing the cooler late summer chill of my life. Her childhood was now a thing of the past.
New era; new fears. Yes, I suppose that at 41, I am old enough to be a Grandma now… I’d better not be for a very long time yet though!!

We needed to talk. What was I to say though? She has to find her own way I guess – my path was hardly puritanical or advisable when I was her age. I found myself praying once again to a God that I’m still not quite sure

I believe in……

We talked but not as mother and child.
We talked woman-to-woman.
Guiding her journey towards womanhood. Womanhood – all of the obligations and expectations. Explaining the pain and joy womanhood entails. With love, support and warmth, I listened intently.

She then confessed. Inevitably.

Mother’s love is no longer enough.

 Response to feedback:

I am thrilled to bits that my tutor approves of this presentation and has noted the strong creativity and professional approach. I couldn’t have asked for more. The reworking of the image can be seen on the print. It has been a very long summer on this course and I am so pleased to finish this on a positive note.

To use my tutor’s wording, his critique is ”hypercritical” to just make sure that I have considered every element. I have looked at the comments to see what might be refined even further. I think some of his critique is personal preferences but I value his comments all the same.

Signifiers:

The ‘heavy handedness’ of signifiers was mentioned. I don’t disagree but at the same time I want my work to be accessible to a wide audience. I have researched more nuanced work and even after all this learning I struggle to understand it. I am left stone cold by much of it – I am still trying to work out Jo Spence at the moment. As it is, I have 140 comments on various photography platforms and albeit the image went down very well, nobody was able to deconstruct it – the diary and Haiku are essential to the deconstruction for most of the population. So, I don’t want to be so nuanced that the deconstruction becomes impossible for most people. Certainly the likes of Crewsdon and Wall are packed full of signifiers that tell a story – that is where I am at with it.

 Placement of objects:

 The first obvious mention was the wicker heart that had been placed in the window. Some love it and some people don’t. I have taken it out to see if I feel strongly either way and I don’t. My husband looked over my shoulder, ”What are you doing??? Why is that coming out??” Others say that it looks better.

 It was a logistical nightmare in the confined space – negotiating high backed chairs – especially from this POV. I did take one photograph with the laundry on the other chair but it was distracting somehow. The chair had to be slightly pulled out for compositional reasons but, yes; it does suggest a third person having just left the room. Perhaps a sibling or father! That is for the viewer to ponder.

The wall hangings had to be where they are as the wall above the fireplace is quite undulating – the other image simply couldn’t hang there. I did try.

 Lighting:

 Light was spoken about. I studied the light meticulously because of how dark the room is. The fall of the light was important. I think that the ‘fall off’ of light on the mother figure isn’t more pronounced because there is light coming in from a doorway outside of the frame. The light falling on the beams is exactly right (I am looking at the room as I type).

I could have created more contrast across the entire image but I don’t want the signification of the beams lost in shadows. My tutor doesn’t like detail lost in the darks and I was careful not to lose detail, it is also why I used a reflector to bounce light into the table! Sometimes you just can’t win! (Another thing worth noting is that the room is full of spotlights and there are lighting and doorways outside of the frame. It was all needed to produce a workable shutter speed (ISO 1000, 1/40).

Yes, I used a small diffuser but that is because I wanted to concentrate the lighting onto the subject and table.

 Outside the frame:

 (Pretend the sofa is a table – it’s the best I could find.)

The sun on the right hand side is the doorway light. The lights underneath represent the ceiling spotlights redirected from paintings on that wall to the table scene.

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Installation:

Finally.

Yes, my tutor recognised that the mock up display is a bit shabby. It was only an experiment. It has been mentioned several times throughout that wider installation design ideas are in the early stages of development.  I simply haven’t ever thought beyond a photograph before the Context and Narrative module.

I have decided to use a diary to send for assessment with the photograph. Within the diary is the Haiku, the diary entry and one photograph of me with the baby. It keeps a personal introspective feel to the work.

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The introduction for this assignment is not for public consumption but is available as a printed document for assessment.  All other elements of the submission is included here.

Chosen image.

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Options.

1.

Too yellow.

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2.

Too dark around the beam.

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3.

Distracting element on skirting boar – just noticed. Also the beam still needs some work.

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Haiku:

Apron strings fall loose

Rose and Thistle intertwined

A confession shared

Diary extract:

1st October 2015

14th February 2000, I went into labour. At 0408hrs on 15th February 2000, my daughter was born. And fifteen and a half years later, I am not sure that I ever caught up after the shock of being told that I was 22 weeks pregnant – how on earth did I miss that?

There hadn’t been time to read the manual! I wasn’t yet married and I was the first female in the family to give birth out of wedlock! It’s only a few months before my wedding though. I prayed that night to God that night albeit I’m not sure I believe in him.

Fast-forward to today… 16 years today since I was first told of her imminent arrival.

My 15-1⁄2 year old baby breezed in this afternoon from her morning out. She seemed to be walking taller. She looked like a woman all of a sudden. Strikingly beautiful – I am biased of course.
I am sure though that she left home this morning looking like a girl still – or rather, a teenager full of angst. She had always had an old head on young shoulders. Hmmm.

Something was different with her. I couldn’t put my finger on what the change was at first. Mother’s instinct kicked in.

Then I realised…
Heart churning, I folded the laundry, and took off my apron. I sat at the table cutting flowers, becoming aware of my age. The cold light flooding in through the window – invading the warmth of our home – reinforcing the cooler late summer chill of my life. Her childhood was now a thing of the past.
New era; new fears. Yes, I suppose that at 41, I am old enough to be a Grandma now… I’d better not be for a very long time yet though!!

We needed to talk. What was I to say though? She has to find her own way I guess – my path was hardly puritanical or advisable when I was her age. I found myself praying once again to a God that I’m still not quite sure

I believe in……

We talked but not as mother and child.
We talked woman-to-woman.
Guiding her journey towards womanhood. Womanhood – all of the obligations and expectations. Explaining the pain and joy womanhood entails. With love, support and warmth, I listened intently.

She then confessed. Inevitably.

Mother’s love is no longer enough.

Technical Details:

Exif

f/7.1
ISO 1000
1/40
32mm
Average camera metering Manual mode

Equipment

Tripod mounted D700
Live view manual focus
SB800 TTL OCF mounted on stand with diffuser
A large reflector – to push light into the shadows of the chair with the laundry

Editing

Lightroom 5. Very mild editing was used to extract one ceiling spotlight and one wall light. Some very mild attention was given to levels, saturation and white balance. A vignette was added. Sharpen and noise reduction was applied to polish ISO grain.

Taken into PS to clone out one ceiling light and address the half painted skirting board. A little attention to levels was also made.

Stadium:

This is an image about the mother and daughter relationship in teenage year. This image would be best understood by westernized women who battle juggle religious conditioning within a contemporary lifestyle while bringing up children. Of course, whatever the cultural backdrop, mothers of teenage daughters across the globe have to let go of their daughters at some point and therefore this cross over lends itself to enquiring minds from further afield. The diary is ambiguous about ‘the confession’ made. Clearly though, my daughter’s entry into the world, coupled with the private conversation signifies that while there is a Catholic/ Christian backdrop, we are far from being ‘holier than thou’. The conflict of the arguably oppressive and what I perceive to be guilt based religious morals versus contemporary lifestyle and pressures on parents/teenagers are at play here.

Denoted elements and the signifiers/ compositional signifiers:

The table was set to be a central signifier because of the cultural connotation of families coming together at the dining room table to partake in food, craft, homework, cooking and conversation. Arguments, grief, laughter are all emotions that are to be found at a family table. The material itself is oak, which is symbolic of strength. You will see in my scrapbook the various compositions tried that could incorporate the table and two or three humans. This was my starting block to work from.

The downward light is gently connotative of ‘interrogation’. Many film noir films have used the oppressive downward spotlight to create intense atmosphere in questioning and confessions. Quite how intense to make that light has been difficult to decide in post. It’s a little bit of an observation of my previous career – a coppers kid doesn’t ever get very much past their parents! This signifier is a little culturally dependent, I’ll admit.

Albeit I was cursing the cold light pushing in from the North facing window against the soft warm light of indoors, I realised that I could utilise this as a further connotative signifier that is mentioned in the diary.

As I moved around the room finding a workable composition within this confined space, I discovered that using a slightly wider angled focal length brought in a very compelling signifier into the frame. The beam took on a signified crucifix that hung oppressively above the table. The perspective drew the eye in through the scene to the subjects and that provided a voyeuristic feel for the viewer.

Taking test photographs of the various structural signifying compositions helped me to further visualize the next aspect of the scene.

How was I going to negotiate all the chairs blocking the view? What further props could I use?

Looking at the test photograph I knew that I needed to keep it simple because I was limited on available space due to the necessary portrait aspect of the photograph. The table couldn’t be moved beyond turning it around as the light needed to stay central. I wanted to convey an orderly environment symbolic of an attentive mother at home – old fashioned maybe but there is no shame in keeping an orderly home as a mother – contrary to popular belief!

The apron string connotation would signify the apron string analogy of children ‘clinging on to mother’s apron strings’ until they are old enough to let go – the apron looks grey, washed out and tired apart from a slightly illuminated patch. The apron would be hung somewhere with strings fallen on the floor. The ironing signifies the metaphorical dirty laundry that is washed – problems ironed out everyday.

Flowers could also play a part. I researched connotations of roses and thistles and the symbolism of passion and protection was perfect. The rose would also pick out the rose in the apron and start to bring in graphic cohesion.

Wall hangings were a deliberate choice. You will see in the scrapbook that I tried a few pictures that signified different things behind me. One possibility was too over powering and distracting. A couple of pictures just looked out of place. I finally decided on the photograph of my daughter as a toddler in her christening gown. The shadow cast forms a speech bubble from my head. I borrowed this concept from assignment 2. The denoted angelic toddler signifies the memories, time past and reinforces the religious connotation of the beam.

Colour theory is important to me. I looked at the natural oranges in the room and considered the reds, greens and slight blue hue in the flowers. This colour palette would work and is to be found in many classic paintings and contemporary photography alike. All of the colours have signification of emotional states that reinforce the emotional intensity of the scene. The highly active combination of the red and green had the added bonus of lifting the image.

Who to include in the image was tricky. I wanted to include her boyfriend as well but trying to get a teenage boy to commit to anything is near impossible – let alone posing for an indefinite period of time! None of us are trained models and neither of them having an attention span that would last beyond five attempts. The mother and daughter relationship would have also been diluted and a different connotations would emerge.

The posing had to be simple and natural. Merely informing my daughter that she was confessing while holding a rose was enough for her. It was more difficult for me to go from thinking about every single element and then run across the room to pose and step into character.

I have brought the diary aspect into the set but kept it ambiguous.

Presentation:

I have used double-sided tape for the first time in my life to construct a mock gallery! I have laid out the photograph, Haiku and text in various ways to see how the work would sit next to each other in a gallery format such as Richard Long’s. The final format reasoning can be found in the scrapbook.

Self-Assessment:

It took time to get moving with this assignment but once the idea was formed, I was flying and I have thoroughly enjoyed the process. I think it was Gregory Crewsdon that captured my imagination. With the best will in the world, I couldn’t compete with his budget and assistants etc. though. But the lighting, atmosphere and the ‘mise – en – scene’ could be explored on a much smaller scale.

Of course Crewsdon’s work is sometimes dismissed as too obvious and lacking subtle nuances. But, for me, it makes his work accessible and easier to engage with for the general population. Maybe my image isn’t subtle enough but my tutor did recognise a while ago that I am not a particularly subtle person and that character is going to reflect in my work. I have tried to be more nuanced with this photograph though. I could never see any point in being so nuanced that 99% of viewers miss the point.

I have taken the course lessons in semiotics, deconstruction, connotation, anchor and relay and brought them together with a technically sound image. For the first time I have been able to use my scrapbook meaningfully to explain the process in producing this assignment.

I have put the image in isolation of the accompanying text, for critique in various locations and the image has been very popular from an aesthetic point of view. There was mild compositional observation about the heart at the window – some liked it and others thought it was cliché. I had wanted to hang the heart of the wall but I was stopped from banging nails into the plaster! The object itself might be considered overpowering but that side of the photograph did require something of that size to balance the frame.

Two people mentioned the placement of feet as being ill considered but out of 140 people that acknowledged the image, only two people had an issue with it. I take the observation onboard though as I had forgotten to consider feet beyond sock colour. I had thought about feet but not beyond making sure that we weren’t wearing bright orange socks or shoes. It’s critiques that I will carry forward with me.

I am pleased with my use of the scrapbook this time. My thinking along the journey to this photograph and juxtaposed text is clearly shown and it is the first time that I have achieved that.

Attending the study visit to see a major Richard Long exhibition recently was a perfect opportunity to see installations that incorporated everything that I have learnt from the course. It was the first time that I had been to an exhibition and be able to really understand what was being communicated. From this I have been able to evolve my awareness of the importance of juxtaposition in presentation. This is something that my tutor has encouraged all through this course. I have played with mock galleries in the form of white foam card and sticky back tape. I am not particularly good with craft activities – so the result matches my skill level!!

The Haiku and diary act in relay to assist the viewer into realising both the context narrative. The actual confession remains a little ambiguous though. The viewer should be left with the questions “Why is her mother’s love no longer enough? What else is that confession about? What is being said between them?” The voyeuristic composition of the image should draw them in to an eavesdropping relationship with the image.

 The only other couple of elements that I could have incorporated are a tape-recorded conversation and an archival element. The recorded conversation went beyond anything that my daughter would permit. The archival element was looked at but I didn’t want the body of work to become a family album. I looked at some possibilities but it didn’t feel as if it was adding to the project in any way because my archive of mother and daughter images is somewhat depleted as explained in the introduction.

I think that I have managed to demonstrate the learning from this module in a cohesive assignment. This assignment has been stretching but I have enjoyed the construction process.

I think that there is little doubt that the subject matter in the early part of this of this course a very painful experience and I don’t want to repeat it. It was very unfortunate really. Of course we can’t sugar coat life but I simply wasn’t ready to deal with the reality of all those subjects all at once. A recent bereavement, trauma and my limitations in life were all at the fore too. It is a shame that I have regained my sanity so late on in the course as I am now able to enjoy the learning once again.

Having said all that though, the underpinning lessons have been crucial to my development and my tutor has put me on the right tracks now to be able to move from level 1 to level 2 with a more confidence. My tutor has been solid, there when I needed him and uncompromising throughout. This is exactly what I respond well to.

 

Richard Long.

Study Visit:

Richard Long

‘Time and Space’.

3rd October 2015.

Arnolfilni Gallery, Bristol.

I think this was the first time that I have been able to engage meaningfully with a conceptual mixed media exhibition. I was able to deconstruct the various elements based on my learning through Context and Narrative.

Since his debut exhibition in the early 1970’s, Richard Long is now one of the most celebrated conceptual artists of this era.

His inspiration is drawn from the landscape, and in particular much of his work is drawn from his walking both locally and internationally. Within this exhibition, one can find sculpture, photography (both as a document of his work in the landscape and as a medium in itself) and abstract fine art. His materials are largely stone and mud.

The exhibition was interesting for me from the perspective of displaying an installation using a mix of freestanding installation, photography and juxtaposed text acting in relay with the exhibited work. Installations are something that my tutor has encouraged me to explore. I find it hard to interpret online images of installations and this was the perfect opportunity to ‘feel’ the atmosphere achieved.

The exhibition was split over three floors. Interestingly, only two major pieces of work were exhibited on the ground floor. Of the 12 walls available on the ground floor, only two walls were used for the art itself and on every other wall were large painted text. The text in some places was in Haiku style and this was interspersed with excerpts of his diary from his walking.

The title itself suggests his interpretation of his interaction with his place in the environment and his physical/ psychological interaction with it. I am due to be starting a landscape module and this is a very good exhibition for me to take my new found knowledge in semiotics and anchor/ relay into a new genre.

On the second floor was a continuation of images and sculpture with supporting text.

I felt that he was communicating two things in his photography. For me, the signifying paths through the rough were connotative of a sense of journey and direction through life. I also wonder if his stone circles were built that were often placed on luscious panoramic vistas were meant to signify a sense of completeness and arrival. The ‘journey’ images were always sat next to the ‘destination’ images. Maybe I read too much into that but this is my authorship alongside his!

My favourite image took time to deconstruct but supports my theory. It was one of the centrepieces in the main lobby…

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Here was, on the face of it, a composition of a mountain. The more I looked, the more I found. As with other of his directional ‘journey’ images, many paths are through rough ground.

The line leading from the camera to the centre of the frame must have been purposely constructed. As my eye travelled along the line, I noticed that the mountain has four naturally occurring triangles that together form an arrowhead. The arrowhead points upwards into a pitch black sky. For me, this is signifying an onward push through the rough and dark aspects of his literal and psychological journey.

The images that were connotative of ‘final destination’ / ‘at peace’ images were all similar to this.

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The physical sculptures were harder to for me interpret but the aesthetic and tactile features were meticulously constructed. I wonder if the sculptures were presented in the environment, further interpretation could be construed.

I’ll be honest, I didn’t find the ‘measurement’ element of the exhibition obvious to interpret but I pulled plenty enough from this exhibition to note this as one of my more successful study visits.

Part 5: Projects.

 

This last part of Context and Narrative brings us to consider the constructed genre of imagination and staging – otherwise known as tableau photography. The course notes explain that the photographer has to work to blend the mix of the factual nature of the medium with artistic fantasy.

Project 1.

Following directly on from the introduction, the author points to cinema and films that give us a sense of time, place, atmosphere etc. Props, paint colour, lighting, décor and posing are all considered and added into the scene for a reason. The reason is to provide signifiers to enhance the narrative of the given film.

Exercise 1:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJEEVtqXdK8

Last accessed 15/10/2015

We are asked to watch this three-minute film clip to work out the signifiers are in the clip and look at how they are combined to create a sense of place and atmosphere.

The opening frames comprises of a busy street scene. 1950’s vehicles serve as part of the backdrop for the two main characters and immediately cause the 1950’s to be signified. The outfits and hair styles of each of them also signifies the 1950’s era.
The queue for a social venue and the sophisticated outfits are connotative of a classy date night at a music/ show venue.

The couple are in their twenties and the body language between them suggests the early stages of a relationship and this is backed up by lots of questions by the female who is unsure of what is going on around her – nuances of dominating male and unsure female are suggested through demeanor and gesture. The male’s status is beginning to emerge when he employs somebody to park the car for him. His demeanor is of a gentleman who is in control but an‘edge’ to him begins to emerge in nuanced NVC’s. His sharp sense dress and slick haircut further secured his position of superiority.

The next set of frames shows the male confidently leading the lady through the backdoors to avoid the queues. Security men greet him and let him straight through. The music and the wall décor signify a happy and bustling environment.

The male leads the lady through kitchens where he is familiar to staff. The kitchen is large with lots of staff and exotic fruit. Coupled with the queues outside the venue; connotations of a thriving business reinforce the emerging signified of ‘this is the place to be and to be seen’.

The paint in the corridor is a deep red velvet colour, which signifies opulence and sophistication.

The final set of frames brings us into the ‘full to bursting’ environment of a music and restaurant venue. Here there are lots of lovely signifiers that point us to realizing that this man is known, respected and is the ‘top dog’ at the ‘top venue’ in town.

When the doors open into the main venue, the staff immediately recognizes him and all staff drop everything to bring furniture into the very front of the audience. Surrounding men fall over themselves to shake hands with him. One lady looks really very indignant that her spot and therefore her status at the front have now been relegated.

The female character is now suspicious, ”What do you do?”

Male, ”In construction”

Female, “Why, your hands don’t feel like they are.”

Male,” I’m a union rep.”

The facial expressions indicate that he isn’t being truthful.

The course notes reinforce my conclusions of the film clip and then provide a link to Jeff Walls constructed image to research and consider.

http://www.tate.org.uk/whats-on/tate-modern/exhibition/jeff-wall/room-guide/jeff-wall-room-6 Last accessed 05/09/2015

The image for consideration is entitled:

After ‘Invisible Man’ by Ralph Ellison, the Prologue 19992000

The Tate Modern tells us that this image is based on the prologue of the book that the images title is taken from.

The prologue apparently describes an abandoned basement where the main character finds him-self – having fallen into it during a riot. He decides to remain there as a recluse. While living there he illegally connects over one thousand light bulbs. Wall has created the scene and taken one sentence from the prologue to anchor the image.

“‘Without light I am not only invisible, but formless as well.”

This image was ultimately constructed as an observation of unseen people in society.

Further to Tate Modern’s link, MoMA add a little to consider by noting that the photograph should not prompt a viewer to necessarily read the book – hinting at Barthes concepts of viewer authorship.

Having said that, there is a handy ‘click and look’ deconstruction tool that refers to the book a great deal!

https://www.moma.org/learn/moma_learning/jeff-wall-after-invisible-man-by-ralph-ellison-the-prologue-1999-2000-printed-2001

Last accessed 23/10/2015

It has been hard to source a large enough image online to really look closely at the content of this very ‘busy’ image.

Clues are scattered around the room. I don’t have any other knowledge of the book apart from that of which is noted above and I am not particularly knowledgeable of the USA culture in 1957 but I do have a little knowledge and I will attempt to deconstruct the image.

First of all is a man. The man is black and that in it self signifies that this might be related to race riots in USA that I believe were happening in America at the time. The space feels like a bunker and he is wearing similar attire to forces personnel. The single bed in a corner provides further connotations of forces ‘bunker’. Is he at war in his mind? Perhaps he is against the racist state? But, then there is a signifier of patriotism with a small flag hanging on one wall that provides with a clue in his location and maybe a hint of patriotism.

He is facing away from the camera and he is only fills a relatively small element of the frame. We can’t identify him and actually the room itself reflects who is the more we look.

There isn’t any natural light coming into the room and there are few bulbs on the ceiling that are lit compared to the amount of bulbs that could be lit. Are these light bulbs signifiers to his state of mind? Is only a small part of his potential illuminated?

The braces that he wears with his trousers may have a metaphor attached to them. I.e. ‘belt and braces’ that in the UK means to ensure security.

He has little in the way of materialistic items. Just enough to provide what he considers being essential. A bed, one soft arm chair, a gramophone, a book entitled ‘Gold dust’. I think these may refer directly to the prologue but these few items have been selected and they are important to him. Perhaps these are the items that cause the few of the light bulbs to be lit (if the bulbs do in fact represent his mind).

Drawing On Documentary And Art

The introduction notes that apart from literary influences in art, artists have also drawn inspiration from the wider art world.

The first example is Hannah Starkey who was inspired by Lord Tennyson’s ‘Lady of Shallot’.

http://www.maureenpaley.com/artists/hannah-starkey/exhibitions/1-hannah-starkey/6 Last accessed 06/09/2015

We are guided to reading the poem that can be found on this link:

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/174627 Last accessed 06/09/2015

I am trying to connect with this particular work but I am struggling to be inspired with any sort of opinion at the moment.

Tom HUNTER looks really very interesting indeed. I’ve not stumbled across his name before but the image provided in the course notes leapt out at me because I enjoy Vermeer influence. The light, aesthetic and composition are really appeals. The notes inform us that Hunter’s work is inspired by stories that appear in Hackney’s local newspaper.

Reconstructing a real story within the realms of art appeals and I am now off to search the Internet for more of his work.

http://www.tomhunter.org/living-in-hell-and-other-stories/

Last accessed 06/09/2015

This link to his website provides a much deeper understanding of Hunter’s motives and inspiration for his work. He has resided in his community for long enough to understand the issues and the character of the place and balance his view of the community against the newspaper reporting of criminal events in the area. He then draws on further inspiration from artists and writers alike to influence the aesthetic and in some sets of work, the titles too – acting in relay.

This is certainly somebody to come back to.

Taryn Simon:

The course notes say, “She uses text and photography to bring ambiguity and deliberate disorientation to the viewer.”

The notes point to her work ‘The innocents’. This body of work is based on photography used as evidence in American courts and sets about questioning truths in photography and the consequences for those involved.

Certainly the issues of memory and the reliance of it as core evidence have long been recognised as problematic and an entire thesis could be written on the subject. The court system is a very different beast in the US though.

Philip Dicorcia:

The course author points us to this photographer with a resume that I can only dream of. One of his projects was ‘Hustlers’ and this project was funded by the US government at the heights of the AIDS epidemic and concentrates on male prostitutes.

The approach to this body of work is a combination of Tableau and documentary photography. This approach caused a stir at the time. Reality and fantasy is blurred.

In a lecture where Dicorcia speaks about this project, he explains how to took the subjects away from their environments and placed them in highly controlled and unfamiliar environments for the photograph to be taken.

In doing this, Dicorcia didn’t know the individual he was photographing nor did was the subject familiar with the environment.

For a minute I wondered what the value of this body of work was about (as it isn’t overtly explained anywhere). Then I realised that this is about the reality of the hustlers. The customer doesn’t care whom they are when they are purchased from the street and the hustler doesn’t care where he goes with his customer – the reality is the same and it is repeated time and again, day after day…. Until the hustler is dead from drugs or AIDS

Each photograph is carefully composed with light and colour. Then there are various signifiers in each image that serve as an anchoring commentary on different elements of a hustler’s life once deciphered.

For example:

1.

http://www.fotofeinkost.de/dicorcia-photographs-1975-2012-in-frankfurt/

Last accessed 17/09/2015

One of the photographs is of a hustler naked from the chest up walking through the car park outside the front of a supermarket.

The overall syntax of the image point towards the man as a product and various other signifier’s anchor the overall signified.

The male’s race may add an extra dimension that depends on cultural knowledge of slavery. He is parading for a purchaser while looking distant and submissive to his fate.

The backdrop provides the signage that is juxtaposed in such a way that ‘Mayfair Market’ becomes ‘A fair Market’.

2.

http://www.timeout.com/newyork/art/philip-lorca-dicorcia-hustlers

Last accessed 17/09/2015

Another image simple sees the back of a male facing the door of a bedroom. His hand touches the wall where his own shadow meets his fingertips. For me it signifies the shadow of death and the hustler facing a bright and almost heavenly light through the door reinforces this narrative.

Research Point:

 The course notes ask us to watch this thirty-minute documentary about the cinematic construction of Gregory Crewdson’s photography.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S7CvoTtus34

Last accessed 17/09/2015

1) The first point that I am asked to consider is if there is anything beyond aesthetic quality to these photographs.

For me it became quickly noticeable that Crewdson is able to capture the ‘otherness’ of a split second moment where a person’s fears, reality or emotions begin to take on realization. These moments are often captured many times through a cinema film sequence to help create atmosphere but as with life, the moment is fleeting and there is little time to ponder. The brilliance in his work is being able to identify that pivotal moment that creates such tension and then captures it in a photograph.

Questions leap out in every image:

“What’s happened to lead to this moment?”

“What is going through the subjects mind in this moment that will contribute to decisions making and outcome?”

“What is about to happen?”

Project 2:

 

The archive.

The course author explains the bodies of work by Adam Bloomberg and Oliver Chanarin.

The project had started with looking at a substantial archive of photographs amassed by photojournalists and civilians that covering the NI troubles. Images that were perceived to be demonstrating evidence of concerns over military practice had been marked with sticky back dots.

Images of the installation can be found here:

http://www.broombergchanarin.com/installations/people-in-trouble-dots/

Last accessed 16/10/2015

Further information about the book and body of work can be found here:

http://www.mackbooks.co.uk/pages/peopleintrouble/

Last accessed 16/10/2015

From this…

‘People in Trouble; Laughing and Being Pushed to the Ground’ – Contacts

and

‘People in Trouble; Laughing and Being Pushed to the Ground’ – Dots

The first set was, as it suggests, the full contacts and the latter set was the cut out of what was found under the dots.

The concealed spots of an image being uncovered and lifted from the wider context provide a different ambiguous narrative.

In the book text abstracted from verbal narratives of the events provide both a literal and a more poetic version of events.

This project reinforced the perils of truths within ‘straight’ photojournalism.

The next body of work the course point to for consider Nicky Birds ‘Question for Seller’s 2004 – 2006’

This link provides some basic written information on her approach with a video clip. The sound quality makes it near impossible to hear unfortunately.

http://nickybird.com/projects/question-for-seller/

Last accessed 16/10/2015

At the bottoms of this link though the purpose of the project was explained:

“Question for Seller enabled the audience to purchase, participate, and engage with two questions: what is our relationship to the past, and what is the value we ascribe to it?”

I seems that this project emerged from two vintage photographs that captured the artists eye. This led to many vintage portraits being purchased with the questions to the seller being.

“Where did you come across the photograph and what, if anything do you know about them?”

Once the collection of purchased portraits was complete, the body of work was then auctioned on ebay with an audience watching and participating in the auction.

Exercise:

Do the images, once on a gallery wall achieve an elevated status?

Cynically, anything that is purchased on ebay for mere pennies achieves an elevated status once placed in a gallery because it become more than a commodity and something that is to be considered with regard to origins and also past, present and future

Would I get more enjoyment from them situated on a gallery wall? I am not sure actually. I love flicking through old photographs at flea markets and find that I am more likely to make up my own stories about who they might be. I’d also find the once prized possession a little sad being rendered a flea market item unloved and no longer cherished. Perhaps this project is an extension of this – a sudden interrupted journey on the photography journey diversion – I know which I’d rather engage in without the influence of another though.

Perhaps in a gallery the images would have a poetic short reprieve from their ultimate destination – given up to mean whatever the new owner wants them to mean.

Where does their meaning derive from?

I’m not sure that I understand the question. The original meaning of the images and their future meaning are unknown. All we know now is that their current meaning is that they are tools for questioning our sense of value to such adopted photographs.

Would their value go up in Ebay now that they are considered ‘art’?

Only if people buy into that notion, I would have thought. People only buy art as either pure enjoyment or as investments. In this case, a trip to a flea market might provide an equally enjoyable vintage portrait for a fraction of the cost. The flea market photograph is unlikely to go up in value without being classified as art.
However, art isn’t defined by monetary value, the price of artwork is merely a by-product of success within certain circles of people.

Finally.

Bringing me to the final part of level 1, the course notes point me to Zoe Leonard and Cheryl Duyane film ‘Watermelon Woman’

‘Watermelon Woman’ seeks to explore the void that exists of black women in filmmaking through the earlier part of the last century. Black women weren’t named in the credits but were mentioned as their character. I.e. ‘Watermelon Woman’. It does go beyond this though as the history of black women is rarely documented – Cheryl Duyane and Zoe Leonard explore these concepts here.

The fabricated character is Fae Richards. Duyane plays her role and also crafts a photograph archive that was used both as a prop in the film. It also has its own life as a body of work as a separate photograph album outside the film.
I haven’t managed to source the film yet (unavailable on YouTube) but there is a link here that gives a flavor of the work and Duyane explains the purpose of a constructed archive and how it came about. Using the national archives that she had explored was just far too expensive.

https://vimeo.com/40534838 Last accessed 23/10/2015

Duyane explains that she enjoys nostalgia born from her childhood of thumbing through albums and these family albums inspired the compositions of her fabricated photographic history.

Duyane goes on to talk about history, which people write it and what is the truth of history. How much should we believe and how much do we question what we are told? It does seem to me that Western history references are predominantly manufactured by Arian males. I wonder what the history references would look like had the academics been from other cultures.

Duyane mentions the need for people to believe media. The truth of her film is that it is fiction and that is lost on many viewers even when they are later told that Fae Richards is fictional. Duyane finds this fascinating that people want to believe the character is real.

Using archives juxtaposed alongside my work is certainly something worth considering. Certainly Duyane’s work seems to take the lessons learnt in this course to the ultimate expression of the combined elements.

Exercise:

At this time I haven’t secured anybody wishing to participate. I won’t record conversations without permission.

If I have found somebody before assessment then I will add to this exercise.

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Assignment 4 amendments.

Please find the feedback here:

Borlase Assign 4 C&N-3

I am very pleased with this report. My tutor had a few minor thoughts for me to consider and the PDF is now amended accordingly. This does take the word count to 1040.

One of my tutors observations was regarding the inclusion of the little more historic context of Brassai. Because of the very limited word count, I had to be quite mercenary about what could be included to make sure that there was plenty of scope to deconstruct the numerous elements of this photograph. I have taken onboard the rest of the feedback.

‘Prostitute, Paris 1931 – 1932’ from ‘Paris De Nuit’: Published in 1932 by ‘Arts et Métiers Graphiques’ periodical.

 

(Please note: The front-page photograph is a lighter version of the original to aid the reader to observe the elements that this essay refers to.)

 

Context:

 Brassai’s training as a sculptor influenced his observation of shape and form and this is evident in his photography. Night photography was unique at the time because the camera plates were simple not very advanced. He was still able to capture the dynamic range effectively to reveal shape and form. It was only when he was forced to use a camera as a journalist that he learnt to appreciate the potential of the medium (1).

When Brassai started to take photographs in 1929, his interests lay within the ‘seedier’ side of the Parisian nightlife and this led to the publication of ‘Paris De Nuit’ (2). Brassai was often observed photographing the Parisian streets and he became quite familiar to those who found themselves also in the vicinity, often engaging with the people in his photographs (3).

One of the people to accompany Brassai on his nighttime explorations was writer Henry Miller(4), who was one of many revered bohemians of that era to have arrived in Paris (5) to immerse himself in the culture of the widely depicted arts and surrealist movement (6). Brassai doesn’t seem to have had any links with England and I wonder if it was Miller who pointed out the London East End slang terms that can be interpreted from the French signage in this image – given that he wrote sexually explicit literature. I will expand on this further on (7).

As well as surrealism, I’d imagine Brassai also contemplated the financial crisis that occurred in 1929 and continued into the 1930’s (8). This depression in the local and global economy can have only inevitably shaped the sub culture of Paris that Brassai was set to document.

Albeit Brassai’s work had a surreal aesthetic and he was amongst those who founded the surrealist movement, he wouldn’t identify himself as a surrealist. He said,

”The surrealism of my pictures, was only reality that was made more eerie by my way of seeing. I never sought to express anything other than reality itself….” (9).

This photograph is one of sixty-six images featured in this project that is a mix of cityscapes, portraits and documentary imagery (10). Each photograph has its own denotative and connotative elements to muse but the set as a whole seems to signify a city that is divided into those who ‘have’ and those who ‘have not’.

Narrative:

 The narrative of this image begins with the denoted lady compositionally placed for anybody with cultural awareness of the connotation of ‘hanging around on dark and lonely back street corners’ to begin to have her occupation as a prostitute signified. The obvious signifiers to support this interpretation are in the lonely, shadowed and littered back street. Of course, the title of the image anchors this conclusion!

Other deeper denoted elements of the visual syntax also provide further connotative signifiers for the viewer to interpret. One of the less obvious denoted elements is to the left of the lady. She is looking away from the light and her back which is in deep shadow, is facing the viewer.

A signifier is potentially born when the viewer reflects on the connotative aspects of light within a variety of faiths, where light symbolizes moral qualities and intellectual knowing (11). We might interpret this connotation as the depicted female having ‘turned from the ‘light’ ‘ – a sinner is thus signified. If this faith based interpretation is accepted as having a Christian basis, a further biblical interpretation would require the knowledge that Jesus does not turn his back on prostitutes and “nor should ‘we’” (12).

The light cast defines her womanly figure enough for a ‘punter’ to be able to view her presence and physique. The other potential interpretation concerns her identity being concealed by the shadow and coat collar; signified in our minds is a woman as a product. The photograph of the scene is taken from a voyeuristic viewpoint that can invoke an atmosphere that is somewhat sinister. Are we looking through the eyes of her next customer looking to purchase her?

Also interpreted from the combination of the denoted dark shadows and connotative isolated atmosphere is the vulnerability of this lady. The streetlight reveals a denoted painted face on the signage, and this further underpins the connotation of the female being vulnerable to the potentially sinister whims of a man.

The denoted French word ‘fromage’ is found painted in the shop signage. When translated directly to the English, this word means cheese. One of the English slang translations for ‘cheese’ is something of ‘cheap and low quality’ (13).

Then ‘Abras’ appears to signify an English cockney slang term that translates to ‘a brass’, which in turn can be interpreted as ‘prostitute’ (14). The number ‘20’ precedes ‘Abras’ on the sign.

So the ultimate disparaging signified that is reached, is that we are viewing a 20-year-old prostitute working her ‘cheesy’ trade as ‘a brass’.

This depth of deconstruction can only occur when a viewer has knowledge of both English language and cultural slang references. The signage is too much of a coincidence to be dismissed as merely coincidental but why would Brassai play with English signifiers though?

This apparently carefully crafted image was taken in the structuralism era when Poststructuralist concepts were yet to acknowledge that authorship is a joint venture between the author, the denoted and the reader (15). The conundrum here is how much command of the English language and cultural nuances of regional English language did Brassai have? Was it his intention to make reference to English slang? Did Miller assist Brassai?

It is also very hard to date the English slang terminology to be able to establish the signifiers that Brassai might have intended – maybe we’ll never know. Perhaps one of Brassai’s

Parisian contemporaries pointed out the signage in the image after it was taken – a happy accident is unlikely though.

As a viewer in the poststructuralist era, the remaining questions, either way don’t really matter because it is an aesthetically exquisite image and semiotic joy to deconstruct. This image could be passed over easily with comments of it aesthetic charms found in the light, composition, shape and form but it is wonderful to realise that it is actually packed full of visual signifiers to decode.

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11 Watts, Williams. (2007). Concepts of God. In: n/k The Psychology of Religious Knowing. 2nd ed. New York: Cambridge University Press. 130.

12 New Testament Bible: Luke 7:36-50.

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Post Structuralism – A very Short Introduction – Catherine Belsey

This little book might be short but it most certainly hasn’t been the easiest of reads.

Alongside the course material and OCA lectures, I have managed to pull enough from it to understand the basic concepts surrounding authorship and who the main players are in the philosophical history  (such as Derrida, Saussare and Barthes) are in structuralist and poststructuralism concepts. It has also given me plenty of additional points of reference for further reading. I borrowed this from the library but I think that I will order one of my own to re read in the future.

How To Read A Photograph – Ian Jeffrey.

This book takes the reader through many iconic images providing background information to them (context).

However interesting the context was, there was little reference to semiotics and that was a bit of a shame. Non the less the book provides ideas and clues into where to start looking when looking to write ones own essay.  It’s the sort of book to dip into now and again but it wasn’t really academic enough for what I wanted at this time.